Finished part one today.
Woohoo!
I'm still behind though.
Ugh.
I've been debating whether or not to kill the best friend of my MC. I talked it over with my cabin mates, saying how she would die, etc., and Writethewrong replied:
"Oh, that's a perfectly valid reason. Perfect motivation for the MC, I definitely think you should kill her."
So..... I just might do it.
Excerpt?
Sure.
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I slip in and out of feverish dreams. Sometimes I awake and feel closed in cold darkness, other times I’m blinded by bright lights and I feel my body prickle and sweat with excessive heat.
Finally the heat broke and I woke feeling like air.
I pant for a moment, my chest heaving up and down. I’m looking straight up into a canvas ceiling, and the scent of salt lulls on an ocean breeze over my face. It appears to be midday, and the rocking of a boat makes me almost want to fall back asleep.
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Annnd....... I hope you laugh!
§Emma
If it really helps to move your story forward - KILL THE BEST FRIEND! I'm ruthless to my characters.
ReplyDeleteAnd the picture is wrong. When I get poison ivy, my skin gets all bubbly and the BUBBLES drive me absolutely crazy!
Haha, so am I sometimes. My only concern (I probably should've mentioned this) is that I don't have a lot of characters.
DeleteOk, fine. I stand corrected, lol.